That is a very sweet story. You are talented and you describe the brotherly love really well. There are not many storys about Luigis Mansion and it is nice, that you take the time to write such a wonderful one. Please keep the good work up. But do not rush it! We all want a dramatically and sweet story ending. Take your time and enjoy writing it.
PS. I am sorry for my English. I live in Switzerland and I am a huge fan of Mario and Luigi. I could not refuse to write to you. Anyway!
Bye Bye!

Excellent characterization, lovely writting overall- I simply adore this fic. If you ever post another chapter, I'd definitely be sure to read it. Great job on this!

Please post the third part soon, I want to see the reunion. Although I wonder what King Boo's original for Luigi were, a fate worse than his brother's. You portray the characters so beautifully in this story. You are an excellent writer.

May I suggest a name change? Instead of brother, where are you, why not brother where art thou? It will provide a bit of humor for those who have seen the movie.

Very nice, I love this Story. You should continue adding chapters. Favorited.
BTW, what does "So che lei potrebbe essere spaventato ma coraggioso. Credo in te, fratello" mean?

Poyo po-po yo-po poyo. (translation) (I like reading this. Its got a good story and I kinda like how it captures the characters emotions.) Poyo yo-po-po. (translation 2) (Sorry if spelled somethn wrong, not good with English.)

Great job on the fic. Keep up the good work!

Ahhhh! I approve! This is really good. You're a really great writer, Claire. I'm jealous! (: I love how you've written Mario. I would find it boring locked away too. Gotta love Luigi though This is brotherly love at its finest!

A great portrayal of the brothers' emotions as they might have been felt during this cult adventure. Of your two viewpoints, I found Mario's the most absorbing.

Good stuff!

Just so you know, there is indeed a Luigi's Mansion 2 coming out on 3DS; dunno when, but there is a sequal being made. I saw the video for it on the WII nintendo channel.

But, not a bad story.

Aw, Mario feels guilty about leaving Luigi behind all that time. I guess that's what he would have to be thinking about while trapped in a painting with nothing to do but wait.

This is a great fic. You really seem to be able to express the characters' feelings. Luigi really loves his brother, does he not? The only thing is that the timeline seems a little messed up. In any case, I'm gonna read the next chapter now.

This was really good!

Now I usually find it tacky when people "beg" for the author to update, but dear god this was amazing! Please don't tell me that there isn't more?

I felt almost as if you were writing down my thoughts as I played the game. I was equally intrigued by the relationships that Luigi had with the ghosts, especially Madame Clarivoya! Will you get to Melody?

I really have to say, this is the best fanfiction I have read in this section, if not this whole site.

The first part of this two-shot was simply amazing. I can honestly say it's the best fanfiction in this section. You captured the characters and their emotions well!

I look forward to the second chapter.