GREAT!

The way you described the things is so... sad and so... deep. Somehow this story reminds me how I write my stuff... so weird and yet so straight-forward.

Good work *cries* That's beautiful work.

you know, i loved this. it reminds me a lot of one of my own works - 'amores perros' ... sei/sub is one of my favourite couples and the angst and suffering and that... i dunno... just _feel_ of their relationship is so amazing.. it's beautiful to say the least. you've captured subaru-chan so well. and yes, i totally agree with you - sei did say, 'i love you'. he had to have said it. i believe it. and always will, because then it all makes sense. and... ahhh, i love you too, seishirou-san!

I loved it! So sad! Yes, they are twisted. Very, very twisted.

I totally agree with this. Good job... I... I think I'm going to go cry now... *sniffles*

Poor Subaru kun...this was so sweet. ;_;

_, i liked it

You know, it doesn't help that during the time i was reading your stories, I had 'Reel Around the Fountain' by the Smiths on repeat..then "Forever Love" and "say Anything" by X Japan during this story (all of the songs mentioned are PERFECT for Sei-chan and Subaru-kun). Anyhow, the last two songs increased the sadness that this story held. I was actually crying. Good Job! You're a great writer; I like your stories! though it would have helped if you had the translations to the Japanese dialogue somewhere...