Wow, this is really well told. Love the first person style and some of the humor despite the serious situation(s). You have a really great handle on your characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Ooh - I like this story so far! Very interesting..hm..wondering how Grayson got to be a werewolf? And who this other creature in the woods is, too. Now my head is just swimming with questions that I hope to find the answers to as the story progresses. I guess, in my own way, I'm trying to pay you a compliment - your writing style and the way you describe your characters really makes me want to come back for more. :)Your story is very cool! Please post more soon?

PS - if you could r&r my wolfman fic, the She Wolf, I'd be most grateful, too. :)