you know, i just can't get into this. It just hits so many points that tell me not to read, you named your si Ryu- 1 douche point. You gave him power armor and a super skeleton with no development into it or reason for it when he already gets fuck off fighting skills- 3 mary sue point. you gave him a pony tail- 1 douche point. instant crossover - -2 forethought points. character tries to be funny but acts like a dick- 5 douche points, -20 likeability. character instantly is top dog, happy and completely adjusted to new environment - 10 mary sue points, 5 douche points, -10 forethought. and dude says oro 20 annoyance points

the points don't matter, i didn't even read the full chap. your character is an unlike-able, annoying, douche-sue who i don't want to read any more about. sorry. i have to be able to root for or at least relate to the protagonist. can't, won't, absolutely categorically don't.

It's about time my favorite GGG couple got some screentime - and I am referring, of course, to J and Renee.

You ever thought about just doing a straight GaoGaiGar fanfic? Non-crossover, I mean? Odds are I'd read it. Hell, I'd probably even review.

Good Primus, Revan's crazy. And I don't mean normal crazy, he's got that special kind of crazy you only expect from a guy like Carnage.

Hahaha, check the window at the top of the screen, Louise - it has Kirche's name up there in the character filter, not yours. I'd say your importance in comparison to hers will, by story's end, be... voided. (puts on glasses)

... So not only is there an actual Cybertron in the fic, but Spiral Power too? This just keeps getting crazier and crazier...

Holy shit, I NEVER would've taken Ryu for 28! At least, not based on how he's been acting. Also, it's nice to see the proper 3G cast getting some screentime. Still want an explanation for Ryu himself, but it's getting to the point that I can wait.

And the one with GaoFighGar armor is Revan? Great, not only is there a Church of Primus, there's a Sith Lord on the loose, and he's the Fighting King of Braves...

"That's just my style..." I assume the Disgaea 2 reference was intentional, in which case the fic just got 80 percent more epic. Now we just need to paint GaoGaiGar red so he'll move three times faster...

And I see, of course, that Ryu is a Student of the School of the Undefeated of the East...

Wait, Marg? As in, GOLDYMARG?!

... Well, fuck.

I'm guessing the familiar is an OC? I'd rather have seen a proper GGG character, but I'll take what I can get.

I'm REALLY starting to hate Ryu's doppelganger now...but I have to admit, the fact that so many different characters are making appearances is really something! And Renais and J's moment - PRICELESS! Can't wait to see more!

BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh man Ryu, nice touch with Vash The Stampede. And I bet the GOOD GaoGaiGar will get the help of not JUST GGG, but ALL the Transformers and become the TRUE Symbol of Courage, Yuusha-Oh Genesic GaoGaiGar.

Hm, entertaining but missing something when compared to earlier chapters in my opinion. Also, that's a helluva lot of crossovers, careful with that, it's not often that ends well. Still, fun enough to read /and/ review.

Ah, someone just tied up and spanked beginning series Louise. Truly, I am heartened.

Cool.

a challenge

a katekyo hitman reborn/familiar of zero crossover

in this one the character is Tsunayoshi Sawada III apparently after armageddon or end of the world the mafia families are all gone with tsuna number 3 living life as a vigil ante wandering the wastes helping people out also he is three times stronger than the original tsuna also he has all 7 vongola rings,vongola gear,vongola box animals and the ability to wield all 7 sky flames then he gets summoned by Louise then he epically powns Guiche also Siesta should be a descendant of some of the original vongola members then the mafia should eventually rise in Halkeginia and whatnot you come up with the rest

Disappointing. Why didn't you just use Guy? OCs suck.

nice story,i really hope to read more of it soon,please keep it up

VERY cool. Can't wait to read some more. There are VERY few GaoGaiGar crossovers, and even FEWER fics with even the ELEMENTS of GaoGaiGar, that I wish there were more because the anime was so cool. I hope to see Ryu Gabriev kick some more ass as GaoGaiGar, the Prince Of Braves. Hell, I bet it would be pretty cool if the OTHER Super Robots from the Brave Series show up as well along with the GGG.

This is pretty great!