|Reviews for The Viking in Shining Armour|
| Gwynwyvar 6/11/13 . chapter 17
So without going into spoilers, I have read the last book and was not surprised at the ending, I was however very disappointed in the way it got there. Even though it was the ending I expected, it made no sense, there wasn't any real development, just Bam! Bah, anyway.
So, I am looking forward to how things work out. I can only imagine how the 'rules' would chafe a little lol.
| Ms Shinra 6/10/13 . chapter 17
Pretty good start for the rules :D Cant wait for more! Keep up the good work.
Also I have put in some help for you :)
Typos or odd things are in these sentences:
'It seemed that the only places Eric really cared to decorate was the basement (his room), the living although - think you had meant although
"Not with the memory of the last time fresh in her mind. Eric had told her that she was under no circumstances to leave the house without her permission and then if she was allowed she was to go with Damon and Phil. " I think you wanted "without his permission" instead
| ashmo2000 6/9/13 . chapter 17
Sookie is going to have a hard time until eric lays off a little bit.
| Baronessjai 6/9/13 . chapter 17
Yo vitz don't do it to yourself you'll only be disappointed CH did us dirty...see ya next chapter...can't wait ;-)
| ncmiss12 6/9/13 . chapter 17
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for more! Eric is hurting himself by keeping her away from everyone.
| LissaP 6/9/13 . chapter 17
I refuse to read DEA! Fanfiction is where I hang my hat now. Great story. I wonder when the AP is going to give Eric the kick in the keister that is needed. Mousy Sookie is just not cool.
| Jfozz 6/9/13 . chapter 17
How have I not seen this story before? I must say that 17 chappies in over 2 years does not bode well to seeing this fic being finished, but here's hoping. So far, I love it, despite some of the timelines being a bit wacky. Other reviewers have mentioned the improbability of all this happening (sale of her house etc) so I won't labor the point.
I really can't wait to see where this is going. Please keep it up. I can definitely see Sookie subverting Eric at every turn, within his rules of course. Good luck Sookie.
| Perfecta999 6/9/13 . chapter 17
I love this story. It's amazing & different! Thank you!
| VAlady 6/9/13 . chapter 17
I see a meltdown coming, just hope she doesn't do it in front of anyone else.
| Guest 5/11/13 . chapter 16
I liked it.
| Toni9536 5/1/13 . chapter 16
Good chapter looking forward to yr next one.
| rcs2001 3/31/13 . chapter 16
This story is very intriguing so far I just started it yesterday. Can't wait for the next chapter phrase post soon
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 16
| Caro66 3/21/13 . chapter 16
Loved this chapter and the soft spots of Eric. Can't wait to read about Sookies new life. Don't let us wait too lang, please!
| VAlady 3/20/13 . chapter 16
Regardless of the way he acts right now (and jerk is the best description), she's already cracked his facade and it's just a matter of time before he loses the battle to deny his feelings for her.