I really like your emphasis of Misa's corrupting nature. I also like the parallel with Mikami's descent into corruption in canon.

And you're right, the chapter does have impact by virtue of being short.

Yours is the type of story that I'm glad I found, but kind of wish I'd found it later because then it would be finished and resolved.

I remember reading a Death Note Carol from a long-ish time ago so I was excited, after not having looked at the DN fandom for a long time, to see that you were still writing.

As usual, I love your original alternate universes. This, to me, seemed a bit like Pocahontas combined with Macbeth combined with Princess Mononoke combined with the Crucible. You've pretty much fueled my dislike for Takada (and initially I only didn't like her because she was showing up Misa), and I just love heart-broken Near. I love how you make several of Light's character flaws shine through and twist them into something fitting that of a prince.

There are a few awkward phrases that seem strange-ish for a fairy tale universe, like Light calling his guards "you guys" or "straw on the camel's back" (it usually goes "the straw that broke the camel's back"). They aren't devastating, but they do pull you out of the moment a little bit.

Overall, though, I just love it. You manage to put a lot of depth into the characters, keep a nice fairy tale tone combined with the setting of war and I love your point of how a leader might eventually see his battle is useless, but he is trapped in it. Can't wait to see how this unfolds!

I only noticed this story today, but I read the entire lot! It's engaging and very good! L is wonderful, and even though it was done quite quickly his relationship with Light comes so naturally it works wonderfully. I like the fact you're writing about racism and misogyny; it makes for a very interesting read. It's nice to see so many of the characters involved one way or another too. You made a couple of spelling mistakes here and there, like forgetting to capitalize names and getting your homophones a little mixed, but nothing big. I subscribed!

That is sort of priceless whenever Matsuda seems clueless and innocent.

I love that Ukita is actually used in a story.

This story is pretty good.

This is so wonderful! You should really write fantasy professionally! This story has completely captured my heart. It reminds me so much of the stories I fell in love with as a child, coupled with the Death Note twist which has only recently captivated my imagination. And with such a creative and original take on the tale, how can I possibly resist? You have me completely spellbound!

(Oh look at you making me write all fancy for a simple review. You're just like my old English teacher.)

Things are heating up (sorry, bad pun) but I don't think Light's view of the future will happen. At least not all of it. And it sure won't be easy.

I like how Light's plan parallels Kira's. I wish we could see more if L though-he's utterly hilarious in this story!

This is awesome! I've never read a take on Death Note like that. Thank you for adding chapters and please keep going, but could you add a little more of Matsuda? You portray him so well...

I see what you mean about it taking a darker turn. It's not putting me off that's for sure. Just need more Matsuda methinks.

This is a great au story so far! I love it especially L and Light. Also I didn't dislike his parents I never cared for them. Nooooo don't kill

Matt! Awwwwww I love Matt. Update soon!

So far, I think your best characterization is of L (due to the humor).

I really like your stories. Keep up the good work!

I like how everyone suddenly "remembers" Sayu as a golden child.

Out of curiosity, why did you pick the names "Eostre" and "Aesir"?

I like the campfire stories. You have a talent for fairytales.