Great story. Loved the part where Vegeta and Piccolo teamed up to investigate the murder.

I loved this story! I can't really describe why, but one of the reasons is for the cute Gh/Vi scenes. X3

T-T I loved the ending to this chapter...

I enjoyed reading this very much, though the trap in the end was kinda... overdone? And the baddie was long since with the police before they were rescued... I wouldn't call it anticlimatic (it was anything but), however, you stretched the story there a bit too much for my liking. The rest though is loveable! I like the idea, and how Gohan went along to jail because of his morales... and then almost went crazy thanks to his experiences. Seems very likely to me, and you did a good job writing it. Oh, and you did fabulous foreshadowing in the first two chapters, without letting the reader now that it was necessary parts for the rest of the story! Wonderful work. *faves*

Now, onto reading its sequels...

Lolchen

Good story, I enjoyed it very much.

probably one of the best stories ive read, good job

Great work.

All were silent for a beat as the gazed at the tool Bulma held out. Chi Chi’s cheek twitched before she stated very flatly, “You intend to rescue my son with a turkey carver.”

That Chi-chi for ya. Great work.

Holy crap! It can't end like this. Great work.

Piccolo Kick ASS Great work.

Great work. Piccolo the Green Knight.

Great work.

Great work.

Great work. Vegeta was so cool in this chapter.

Great work. Go Piccolo. He's my fav. Alien Char.