Well his background is interesting. I'd love to see more and how it happened that Fride ended up having a short term memory. Please update soon.

Wow this story is amazing. Please continue. I'm so eager to see what happens next.

i just read your information at the end of last chapter, and it was very in depth. i liked it. if you want me to beta, i'm willing.

that is rather frightening, to imagine Fred as having been a blood sacrifice. what confuses me is the name of Samhain being used incorrectly. it has never been a force or a being, but a time of year, another day for the New Year, and it is impossible to offend a holiday, only the Gods and Goddesses who have ties to that day. is there a reason you have suggested Samhain is a being?

I rarely review, that fact being borne of laziness. ;) However, I find myself following this story, perhaps because of the intrigue? I find myself learning new words, as well, and that's always a tickle. I will review each h chapter, and I expect a swift repremand if I should forget. Sod all those lurkers, anyhow. Definately a good chapter. Can't wait to find out just how doomed their village is. ;)

Wait! What was called? I can't believe you stopped here! This deserves so many more reviews than it has. Of course, small fandom, so... Anyway, I like the plot, the story, the foreshadowing, and the like. It's a good story.

I dont know if you still check your reviews but PLEASSSSSSSSSE keep writing! I really enjoy this story! :D

Wow what's going on? I know something's trying to get thr kids, & I think Fred's protecting them. Did Fred get the white stripe in his hair because of Lizzie?

This is very interesting. I'll be interested to see how Fred/Lizzie turns out in all of this. At least now Mickey knows he's real, but the way he saw him was kinda creepy

Ok you've peaked my interest. I'm a major Fred & Lizzie shipper so please update. I'd like to know where this is going

Yay another Drop Dead Fred story! I hope Fred & Lizzie finally get together! Can't wait until Lizzie & Fred meet up again (they do right?)

i have a few things to say. first, the end bit really was interesting, and i'm glad there is a plot that's beginning to come out. second, i do love how you have set everything up, it is very interesting. third, what will the pairing be, since you mentioned romance in your genre. fourth, i cannot wait for more and hope you update soon!

Woohoo! Fred makes an appearance. You are completely right about the fact that Fred's mind is always running. And where did that necklace come from? Hmmm...

And the plot is brewing. Sounds creepy. I can't wait to read the next update!

PS Thx for the mention. :D

Okay, I have no idea why no has reviewed this but let me say, this is really well written. I love how you've characterized Mickey in the first chapter and Lizzie in the second. I can't wait to read more! Great job!