Like the story, just wish to ask one thing though, this will, in the end, be a Cologne/Ranma story, wont it? I LOVE strange matchups in the Ranma realm, especially Ranma/Kasumi, Ranma/Ku Lon and Ranko/Ryouga.

I don't really like the premise, and the story is more than a little goofy, but you do quite a nice job with writing the characters, as well as the interaction between them.

Nice story. Though why is Ranma forever being victimized because of his girl curse, why couldn't the age reversal have reversed his body to uncursed state. Anyway, show some mercy, and get rid of the curse. A joke is fun only so long.

And let's see more of Cologn's mechanations.

Plus Ranma needs more of a back bone. I'd say that in many ways he comes out to be considerably lesser than the girls he's with. For all his arrogance, the guy doesn't have any respectable level of self-confidence yet. And couples aren't supposed to be overly mis-matched.

BTW best not to have Super human enemies in this one... unless you cross it with DBZ some time in the future. That might be nice(atleast to the point of Ranma and Cologne training with the Z-senshi, though fighting baddies sorta reduces the fun value(not the interest value)of a story at times. And i'd like this to have a somewhat happy feel

This is a nice fic, very light-hearted and somewhat of a different idea as well. Please continue and perhaps go in the "things get resolved" direction, though not too fast. I personally like a mix of serious/light-hearted.

this is a cool fic

I like it! Have always liked the mushroom premise, and this sound like it could get pretty good! Keep up the work...

hmmmmmm an intersting idea *pulls the mushroom off of my pizza and eats it and is suddenly 9)

HAPPOSAI!

Wowoow great story

Plot problem: the trio of Nabiki, Akane and Ranma puzzle over the magical mushrooms left in the room occupied by Ranma and his father. Where do they get the idea that it was intended for Nodoka? She doesn't live with the Tendos, as you acknowledge at the end, when Ranma goes off to find her *in her own house.* She wouldn't be there, and she wouldn't walk into the room occupied by Ranma and Genma; nor would she simply eat something sitting there, if she did. Ranma would be suspicious. Only Genma would be a big enough idiot to grab food that came out of nowhere, in the middle of his sleeping quarters, and eat it.

For the rest, some decent characterizations-but could you fill in the backgrounds? It seems as though Ranma and Cologne in the first scene are standing against a white nothingness, speaking. This is a problem elsewhere, as well. Give you a sense of the environment they move through: what it looks like, sounds like, smells like. Not a lot, just enough to go a long way. And good luck. :)

About time someone did a fic based highly on the magic age mushrooms. I really do look forward to more. Not much more I can say until more chapters are out.

Hey who said you title is bad I think it fits well please write more!

Hmm this might turn out very good depending on how you do the next chapters. You gotten off to a good start.

impressive. R/C matchups, i believe i've only seen two of them... and this storyline is quite original in the way it's used.

love to see the next chapter. try not to rush things too much, and listen to what you want to do.

More More Please

hmmmm...