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PadmeSkywalker10 12/6/11 . chapter 1
I really hope you write a prequel about them almost breaking up. I would love to see possessive Spock.
LogicalGoth 8/21/11 . chapter 1
Is there anyway I can convince you to write a sequel/ prequel to this story about what happened during that really bad month? Jim cheating on Spock, Spock finding out, his reaction and feelings, then Jim trying to convince Spock to take him back and finally Spock giving him a chance... PLEASE!

I've been dying to read it since I first read this one, so can you pretty please write it? PLEASE

Logicalgoth
Doni 6/6/11 . chapter 1
And that's where it pays to have good friends on top of a wonderful partner. Nicely done.
Eru no Tsubasa 5/16/11 . chapter 1
Awesome! Nyota's a wonderful friend, neh? XD
Ender's Fangirl 5/16/11 . chapter 1
Aww love this
Freedom 4/20/11 . chapter 1
WOW! Man that was good. Can you please make a sequel.. Haha; I loved the funny and desperate moments. Keep it up!
Blue-Eyed Chica 3/6/11 . chapter 1
love it!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind 2/27/11 . chapter 1
awww just aww i loved it hte emotions seemed to shine though great job
Crysania Fay 2/27/11 . chapter 1
That was a delightful read. I think that it would be great if you wrote one from Spock's pov starting where he got Uhura's IM. That would be wonderful! I love how emotion Jim is in this. _
RosewrappedinLace 2/27/11 . chapter 1
You would want to use verbal not vocal at the end there honey. Otherwise it made me go awwwwwwe in a perfect way.
ShamelessSpocker 2/27/11 . chapter 1
I have to give you your kisses first *KISS* because you have made me so happy today. Your story takes the cheating Jim we so often read about and gives it both truth and recovery. I can believe Jim would sleep with Carol during a bad time. He wasn't exactly the most forward-thinking individual in the beginning. But this forgery, and his desperation to prove to Spock that he's remained faithful, prove he has grown up. I love how Spock has already regained his faith in Jim, and points out he wouldn't have taken the trip had he been uncertain of Jim's fidelity. I love how the command crew are defending Jim (Uhura got through first, you go girl!) and McCoy explains he feels Jim and Spock have got something special. Let's see the tabloids try that trick again! They'll have a pissed Vulcan and a defensive command crew to deal with! Thanks for this story. I hope you're doing well. Oh, okay. One more kiss. :) *KISS*
WickedWitchoftheSE 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Aw...I have to say I had kind of expected that Spock had released the photo. Like he had been doing some controversial research and wanted to distract the reporters so he relaesed that. I still adores it though, very cute, I loved nervous Jim!
jessica499499 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Very emotional and passionate! I loved it to bits! All the reactions were perfect and heartfelt and awesome! Great work!
timme 2/27/11 . chapter 1
it's so sweet. i hate and was surprised that jim cheated, but the aftermath was great. the best of people make horrendous mistakes, but it depends on what they do afterwards. so many people cheat and accuse their partner of "driving them to it"

how the hell do you forgive someone for that? jim attempted to make up with spock for 7 months (partially cuz they were on a starship maybe) but most would stop after initial rejection.

good on them. very realistic if someone didn't terminate a good relationship immediately and was truly sorry.

cheers!
Magpie1600 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Hum,this gives me a warm glow inside. What a glorious tale. I'm glad Spock is so forgiving. Did Jim just forget Spock's telepathic ability. Can't wait to see who set up the fake photo. Maybe it was Carol, won't surprise me, jealousy, especiially from a rejected person is a very strong emotion, especially when coupled with Alcohol. Maybe it's not her, but T'Pring, now wouldn't that be a good twist.
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