Gaia Lao 2002-03-25 . chapter 1Awww, and things were starting to look up for Ken. Nice foreshadowing of the accident there, though from the summary it was kind of obvi--. (G: And once again Detective Gaia strikes.) You're never going to let me live that down, huh? (G: Nope) *sighs and turns back to Nic* And you just had to add in the irony of Yolei waking up, didn't you? (G: I guess she did.) It was a nice touch at the end, though I was half-hoping you wouldn't do something like that. *shrugs* Whatever suits your mood I guess. And I hope my muses don't start bringing up that ongoing ethical debate on whether doctors should tell the whole truth to their patients and the patients' relatives. Sorry I can't help out with the lyrics to "Breathe." Again, I never heard the song, and there's only so much that a google search can do for me. :( Overall, the fic was very well-written, and you did a good job bringing this trilogy to a close. (G: Well how could she go on when she killed off the central character?) That's it! *drags muse to a nearby cannon while typing to Nic* I hope you keep up the good work! *blasts muse out of the cannon* |