I can't beleive it's so short . I liked it anyway.

So far it's good. There's only one little grammatical error that I'd like to point out, in the first sentence, when you said 'sometimes Fabian gets under her skin at times" Saying 'sometimes' at the beginning of a sentence then saying 'at times' is like saying sometimes twice. You've just got to pick one of the two and stick with it. D

Other than that, it was good. Although I'd just like to give you a hint when it comes to getting reviews:

If your story has even the slightest hints of Fabian/Nina in it, you should fill in the characters section with "Fabian R. & Nina M.". Even if it's not the main pairing, or if the plot is evenly divided between two pairings, that tiny change will still bring all the Fabina shippers (and reviewers) flocking to your story. ;)

This is an interesting story! The last lines are effective!

i love this chap well writen... but its weird to think patrica likes fabian... now that i think avout it its prett. funny :D