Awww oo

That's sad. But it's gooood.

Though, should it b easy for a shinigami to die? Eating some berries and the likes. The immortal, after all.

Aah.. And how did Will die? It wasn't mentioned, right? Maybe hinted, but.. I don't think so either. Was he killed? Suicide, though I find it unlikely? Or was it just a.. 'Normal' death, however that may be?

Ah.. Your writing is good. You use quite a lot.. Eh.. What to call it in English... This - and that - and this. You know.. That '-' thing xD Details of course. It isn't even important. Mh. I think. Though, i be too much, so watch out xD

Anyways! Lovely. Sweet and sad story

Til next time!

Nathalaia

Saddeningly Beautiful

this makes you want to cry... in fact i have tears in my eyes right now as i write this, it's good very sad but then again it's meant to be.

I like that last line and i guess when you love somebody in your dying moments you'd probably be thinking about what they'd think of your choice of taking the easy way out

T_T

You know I never miss your fics! omg whyyyyy! GREEEEELL! this is so saaaaad! zomg D I loved the description! utterly beautiful! owww I cant imagine Grell without love in his life, without William x.x! aaaaaah my baby redhead!

Crude and realistic! I loved it in a very very wicked way XD ( and... I hope they meet each other after death... T_T

That was cruel o.o

beautiful written but cruel o.o

I really like that Grell changed her appearence after Will's death, I think it fits perfectly... and Grell with short hair is sexy XDD

This was really good, hope to see update on PG and CD soon :D

This was unbelievably beautiful and moving.

Your descriptive writing is truly a talent :3

so beautiful! XD!

How did Willy die? :(

But now Grell is a living Juliet to his Romeo! Well...living dead...now dead...GAH!

*cries* Noooo Grell! Why did you kill yourself! You were so young!

*clap clap* bravo! This story brought me to tears!

Lovely as always. I feel so sorry for Grell. I almost want to cry.