Truly a fascinating start with sooooooooo much potential as far as story plot is concerned. Too bad you don't update frequently :( I really can't invest time and emotion into something that takes too long. I have authors on whom I've been waiting for months and years. I've been waiting on one particular update for about 7 years. I guess it ain't gonna happen. Anyway, you're really very talented and managed to pack so much intensity into such a short piece of work. I cannot imagine how good a truly well written and explored fic of yours would be :)

Great start, excellent writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Write more, please!

I like it and wanna how it goes along with the guys.

:-)

Great start! Can't wait for more! :)

Great start! Please keep going!

lllllllloved the start! i'm a big fan of wounded sick steve so please update soon! tnx

HI! I really like this! I can't wait for more! I always love it when the strongers member of the team gets sick/wounded and the others have to look after them. It rocks! This was good! Keep it up!

Arlothia

Oh, this could become a great story. Write more!

You are indeed cruel...please have some mercy on us and write more.

Howdy Mary,...LOL.

okay, so I'm not even "new" to the fandom, I watched like...10 minutes of the show so far buuuut sick!someone is always great, right? And I have to get used to the H50-fandom if you're that infected *winks*

I like Danny and Steve. Seriously, I do. *_*

And peeeerfect English, 'sounds' great. Respect!

Well done,congratulations!

*hugs you tight*

Krit

I love this beginning (meaning there'd better be more) and i can't wait to read the next part (meaning there'd better be more).

Update soon! (cos there better be more!)

Welcome to the Hawaii and hurt!Steve fans. :)

Please do continue, it's really not enough for me, lolll.

You are just plain cruel...not to Steve, but to me!

Get busy.

The was really good for your first H50 story. Poor Steve

I certainly hope more is coming! This is a promising start for some good h/c fic )