hey ansome update next chapter soon.

this is a bttf/power rangers crossover fic.

But...but...you left it hanging? What paradox is that? YOU HAVE TO GO ON!

Ahem...okay, I'm all right now.

Great beginning with the end of the III part. A few pointers:

This is not a script. Use full sentences, paragraphs, and everything that goes with that. Your grammar is great.

The transition to the Time police is too abrupt. Write a little prologue that describes all the changes, perhaps.

Don't be discouraged-if you edit it, it will be fine.

I liked it a lot and if you have the chance continue this.

Cool story Brandon. Continue it please.