liked the flirting

really like this story idea. love that song

you suck at spelling and your story is too conveinant, try to use spell check

great story

yo!

awesome chapter! great naruto/tia moments!

i can't wait 'till yoruichi finds out :D what will her reaction be?

update soon!

Ja ne!

Not bad for a harem crossover, yet the story itself is a little bland maybe reveal or even add a story element to it. Grammar and spelling is a problem nothing a spell check or even better an beta reader couldn't solve. Looking forward to your next and hopefully improved chapter.

FF24seveneditor

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Wow, this is a great beginning and u definitely caught my interest with this crossover fic. I'm looking forward to reading the second chapter and I also I want to thank your girlfriend for getting you back into writing fanfiction my friend. :)

P.S. Despite your fic having a good start, the only criticism I have of your new story is that u have a lot of grammatical errors, so please look back on this chapter and fix it as well as do your best to avoid more grammatical errors for your future chapters. Overall, your fic is great and I'm wondering what Naruto is going to do now since he has a lot of things to do before he goes after Aizen.

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

wow very nice you have improved a lot

very well done can't wait to see what happens in chapter 2

Well now this looks like it will be awesome, please update again soon.