I don't know what to say about this other than "Awwwwwwwwww." I especially liked that the TARDIS kept coming to his mind, because even with all the fluff and the rambling, he'd never just forget his "constant companion."

Great! Great! *claps hands together enthusiastically* I LOVE stiff from inside the Doctor's brain. It's so funny! :D

Ah that was brilliant. Very funny, and well written! Great job :D

There's always some sorta interruption, isn't there?

Sweet :)

Oh, I m loving this series. Keep it up, please.

This one-shot is a bit different from your normal writing style, what with the quotes and all, but it flows superbly.

After all, who can resist a dig into the Doctor's thoughts? Especially concerning something so domestic. That's why I love the mortgage scene oh so much.. 3

It's lovely and delightfully saccharine, but then I came to this:

"And kissing. Yes, definitely kissing in a yurt. That's not domestic is it? It'll be cozy and portable. Our own little travelling home. With kissing!"

Honestly, Doctor. A yurt? Oh my, could not stop laughing :D

Brilliant :) I love that scene, and this is the perfect interpretation of what he's thinking in it.

Laura x

Oh wow. Just...wow. That was scary...in a good way! :oD Scary how spot-on close you are to Mr. Tennant's speech patterns and cadence. Well-done, you! (You've been watching the old eps rather closely, haven't you?) ;o)

This scene has always been one of my favorites, too. Stupid monster had to go and ruin one of the cutest moments in Dr. Who history...again! :o/

But anyway, that's not your fault. Sorry. Any thoughts on continuing this more? For example, the moment where he's talking to Ida as he dangles over the hole and about to let go? Worth a shot, perhaps?

Cat

This was really cute! I appreciated that the Doctor's thoughts were entirely believable for his character. A lot of times the thought processes of the Doctor in fics are just filled with copious amounts of Rose adoration, and not much else, which is always nice but seems unrealistic. :) It also makes sense that he'd go through, like, eleventy-seven thoughts in the time it takes Rose to say two words. Haha.

I have watched this scene so many times, hoping to glean some sort of readability to the Doctor's thoughts, of course to no avail. Heh. So I'll choose to insert this mentally for future viewings. :)

Nicely done!

Oh-ho-ho Doctor! BUSTED. :) Now, I would LOVE to see Rose's thoughts from this particular scene.

OMG! That was completely and utterly FANTASTIC! I knew whatever you wrote was going to be great, but this just blew me away! You have such a talent for capturing the Doctor's character and bringing his thoughts to life so perfectly.

And this line:

"I suppose if Rose Tyler is there, then that's where my home is now."

*swoon* It just doesn't get any better!

I've always wanted to know what he was thinking in that moment, and now I do! This has just become canon for me! XD

Thank you for sharing this! :)

Cute! I've always thought about that part- what were the both of them thinking?

yes, a coward every time...lovely written.