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   end2097 10/11/12 . chapter 21It can't be that bad... Is this the worst of the angst? I hope so! |
| end2097 10/10/12 . chapter 20 Hmmm... A slippery slope downward here... |
| zpower21 10/9/12 . chapter 5 So I like it. I like the pace as it reflects two broken people trying to figure their feelings out. That is real. None of this falling into bed and everything being perfect stuff. I do have concerns about Seth though. He seems to write Edward off immediately and that is that. It's very OOC for him and it seems a bit off. I guess we need to know the full jake story to get a clear idea of why Seth is reacting this way. Edward needs to let to of his notion that he has to save Tanya and that her problems are his fault. It sounds like these problems were there long before Edward. Poor guy has a serious hero complex. He feels like he has to save Tanya from herself and drugs and then save Bella from him and the crap from his life. He just needs to chill. Z |
| end2097 10/9/12 . chapter 16 Yikes... Edward saves the day! I hope he sees it that way too... |
| end2097 10/9/12 . chapter 14 Still hooked... |
| end2097 10/8/12 . chapter 7 Yikes! Don't answer the phone! |
| end2097 10/8/12 . chapter 5 Yeah! No doubts! |
| end2097 10/8/12 . chapter 4 Wow... Still hooked. I've never seen Wuthering Heights with Olivier in it... I may check that out. |
| end2097 10/8/12 . chapter 3 Enjoying the story so far. Found it after a rec on Twifanfictionrecsdotcom. Surprised there aren't more reviews but happy to add some! |
| Duppi 10/6/12 . chapter 7 Hi! I really like your story! Your Edward and Bella are well characterized and just great! I love this kind of Edward, sweet and tender but with a little bit of pure passion. I don't know if you wanna know but the right translation in italian for 'Could you please kiss me already' is 'Ora potresti baciarmi per favore'. I don't wanna be rude, just for your future references! Bye! :) |
| soonergirl143 9/25/12 . chapter 35 Omg! I loved ur story I didn't want to stop reading it lol I am def headed to ur profile to find the sequel :-) I bet It's as good as this one :-) |
| robsenforever 9/17/12 . chapter 6 love it:) |
| vb 9/15/12 . chapter 3 Edward's not divorse yet he still a married Man, why Bella agree go on date with Edward so easy? Bec Edward's hot? |
| princess07890 9/16/12 . chapter 34 SO amazing :) Loved it! Now, to read the sequel :) |
| princess07890 9/15/12 . chapter 33 SO AMAZING :D YAY! |
