Fingal's not that childish, but the story was good. You captured Tay's character perfectly.

That's really sweet.

I love Padra too! Tear, because this story makes me want to cry from happiness. But why is Fingal so young?

that-was-so-CUTE! i loved it! fingal and padra are so adorable together. PLEASE WRITE MORE! :)

-greenplanet

p.s. recycle please! save our planet! ;)