Please continue this story! I really want to know what happens!

Please update! like right now!

This really needs to be continued. I mean, it's so great and I'm sort of sad that it was posted so long ago and never got updated. Honestly your tone and how you write this is so close to the actually book that I was excited to find this! Please, PLEASE. If you read this, keep going? I'm completely intrigued and the cliffhanger is a killer.

fantastic...now come on keep updating

Well written. I like how you kept a tone similar to the book.

Love it!

Very good start! You do a great job in writing Kristy's personality. Please write more!

I really like this and I NEED to know what's next.

Keep updating!

Good start. I'd like to see what happens next.

i just like just just finished reading this book and i was like...gotta have more...so i went here and wow you write just like Sarah Dessen

I LOVE THIS! I, for one, think you should keep writing this. It has the exact things that i imaging Macy saying. All her comments, and actions... It's exactly like Sarah Dessen herself is writing it. It's absolutely wonderful. :) Keep writing it, please, it's AMAZING. I really want to see how this turns out.

Circe ;)

I love this story too. :)

Awesome start but the ending is kind of odd...I think it's the wording but anyways, thanks for the read.

Cool! I likes it! More please! :D

Really descriptive and well written. Keep going! :)