|Reviews for Wish For The Past|
| aFanAddict 5/14/13 . chapter 38
Another lil tidbit. Goku found out. I forget how but he found out.
| aFanAddict 5/14/13 . chapter 37
I know that this was done years ago and it's probably been said but... Puar is a boy
| Tepheris 5/10/13 . chapter 43
What scares Saiyans? Enemies that can wipe out billions of lives in with their little finger? Thumbscrews, water-boarding, floggings? Monsters that transform with the full moon? No, the only things that scare Saiyans are human women, frying pans, and shopping.
| Tepheris 5/10/13 . chapter 24
The site . isn't up anymore, do you have any recommendations as to where I could find a good source of common Japanese phrases, specifically honorifics? Or if you could answer a few questions, that would work too. I'm looking for the honorifics that would be used in a master-slave dynamic. … That probably sounds wrong. Let me give you an example of the story I'm working on.
Vegeta found himself unable to breathe after being pummeled in the solar plexus by a metallic gauntlet. His owner didn't even give him time to catch his breath before shattering Vegeta's nose. Vegeta's mouth formed an expletive, not having enough air in his lungs to make sounds.
His tormentor didn't pause for a millisecond before grabbing the Saiyan's wrist with one arm while the other clamped tightly on Vegeta's shoulder. Vegeta's face scrunched in anticipation of what the cybernetic-armored Tuffle was about to do next. With a sickening pop, the Saiyan's shoulder was wrenched out of it's socket and was dislocated.
Vegeta felt himself blacking out before he received a painful jolt of electricity from the bands that marked his enslavement, preventing him from falling unconscious.
"Can't have you passing out, Vegeta-me. I'm not sure if your body will live through my assault without qi reinforcement." Vegeta's captor snickered as he reconnected the Saiyan's joints, eliciting a moan of pain.
"Ah, caught your breath already? Splendid! That's two seconds faster than the last time. I think you've finally reached the point where I can start testing the suit's energy attacks, even if I'm only running the suit on 1% power." The Tuffle mocked, moving his left palm to the region of Vegeta's body where the Saiyan's ribcage was located.
Vegeta hissed, gathering as much qi as he could to the mitigate damage before his ribcage was mostly shattered by the torrent of artificial qi. He felt his shattered ribs puncturing his viscera before he went into shock.
A few minutes later, Vegeta was revived by a familiar sensation similar to submerging a paper-cut in lemon juice. That meant he was in the healing chamber. He mentally cursed the efficiency of the newly discovered Senzu extract. With it, his master had found that he could deliver Vegeta injuries that would have been fatal without the miracle cure. He opened his eyes once he felt the regenerative liquid recede below his face, and glared at the man who had nearly killed him.
"Well, I haven't seen that look on your face in quite a while, Vegeta-me. I do hope you aren't considering doing anything stupid. Then again, I shouldn't expect a monkey to have any intelligent thoughts." the Tuffle chuckled darkly.
"I'm no stupid monkey." Vegeta snapped. "If I'd been coddled from birth with the constant education you Tuffles receive, I could do your job just as well as you."
"Such insolence!" Vegeta's master growled, making a motion with his fingers to trigger a punitive electric shock through the metal headbands, wristbands, and choker Vegeta wore. "You think you're equal a Tuffle, Vegeta-me? You, a detestable Saiyan, a barbaric, savage species that was scarcely civilized enough to refrain from throwing their own excrement prior to being domesticated? You, the spawn of the delusional fool who attempted to lead an uprising against a vastly superior race?"
Vegeta had to wait for his breathing to stabilize before he could answer. "N-no, Shitaki-sama. I'm nowhere close to equal with the Tuffles." Vegeta said with feigned humility. /*You Tuffles are the lowest of the low. Having to alter your own moon in order to prevent us Saiyans from transforming into Oozaru and obliterating you scum. Then you put these infernal devices to subdue us because without them you would be at our mercy the moment you take off your battlesuits. I'm not your equal, I'm far better than you.*/
"Good to hear, at least you're not completely devoid of intelligence." Shitaki sneered, missing the hint of contempt in Vegeta's horonific.
Vegeta felt his tolerance for being insulted growing thin. Being dealt injuries that would have killed him if not for the rejuvenation chamber. He was so furious . "If I am so deficient in brainpower, then why is it Tabella-sama seeks my assistance with her studies?" Vegeta said with the smirk he held a copyright on. Vegeta was glad he had kept his head, as the look on Shitaki’s face was priceless when Vegeta mentioned that his master's daughter would often call for Vegeta to help her with homework she was having difficulty with.
I hope you don't mind me using the review system to try and get help on my own story, please don't flag this as spam! (((o(* _ *)o)))
That said, I'd really appreciate it if you gave me your thoughts on my story in the making.
| Tepheris 5/10/13 . chapter 22
So I guess you're making Bardock a brilliant scientist in this fanfic?
Also, in the manga, the ship Goku used in the manga/anime only took six days to get to Namek.
| Wow 5/7/13 . chapter 1
u guys will never stop me
Errr i think Burenda disagrees anon- fail smh.
When i have time may check this out 1 day on the bright side
| dbzfan8 5/5/13 . chapter 1
Gosh, only Goten could do such a thing :P
| Burenda 5/4/13 . chapter 70
Due to review spam, all guest reviews are being moderated at this point. I don't mind reviews, even for a story this old, but please do not involve Wish For the Past in a trolling war.
| anon 5/4/13 . chapter 1
u guys will never stop me
| Talimancer 5/4/13 . chapter 70
this really really badly needs to be made into part of the cannon series
| Katsuargi 5/3/13 . chapter 1
Anon is a Troll from the Dragon Ball Multiverse comment section that saw one of the authors of Bringer of Deaths posts that stated they had reached number one on DBZ reviews and responded like this.
That said, Wish for the Past was one of my favorite stories back in the day. Great job Burenda, if you still even check reviews. xD
| AnonBurenda 5/2/13 . chapter 1
Is anon secretly Burenda trying to keep their fanfiction record? That would explain the random 30-50 reviews in the past 10hrs...
| Sideman crusher 5/2/13 . chapter 1
Looool wtf did all these random reviews
| anon 5/2/13 . chapter 29
perv you like bardock
| anon 5/2/13 . chapter 28
no real life caught up with you