 True Love Lives Forever 6/15/11 . chapter 6Thanks for posting this story. It was a very interesting idea and it was written very well. Certain parts of the story had me crying like a baby. I'm normally not someone who believes into supernatural, with ghosts and the like, but I liked the way you approached this topic here. Thanks. |
 Ne'ith5 6/9/11 . chapter 6Excellent! I really enjoyed the touch of supernatural/sci-fi in the story. This was also one of the few Peter centric tales that didn't annoy me. The villain though mainly off screen was ever present his machinations woven carefully like ribbons through all of the other characters lives.
Neal remained the focus of the story by the actions of his friends and their realizations of his importance in those lives. Everyone from Peter, Elizabeth, June, Jones, Diana, and Mozzie had a reaction to what had happened and it was true to the series. |
 Tony WildRiver 3/7/11 . chapter 6Oh, very nice! Great ending to a rather fascinating fic. I kinda though Neal was having another "dream" when we woke up the week later, but that was a clever move on that doctor's part. Excellent story *applause* _ |
 MaraudingSnitch1314 3/7/11 . chapter 6A very nice ending. Good work on this story and I look forward to your next. :) |
 Kanarek13 3/7/11 . chapter 6Great story, I loved the idea with the pidgeon, the whole Neal being trapped in his apartment was an awesome twist, not to mention the fact that it was the doctor who kept Neal asleep for so long... Can't wait for your next story :D |
 pechika 3/7/11 . chapter 6Nicely wrapped up |
 georgiamomma123 3/6/11 . chapter 6Great story, sorry to see it come an end. |
 govgal 3/6/11 . chapter 6very nice. I'm so proud of myself. I figured out the anagram before I read the answer :) Great idea. Loved that the carrier pigeon was delivering the message! |
 georgiamomma123 3/5/11 . chapter 5Awesome chapter! Neal's ghost NEEDS to haunt Peter, if he's not going to have faith in him. Maybe his ghost will join
them for lunch. Kidding, but I do love this story! Update soon! |
 pechika 3/5/11 . chapter 5Let Neal wake up soon, poor Peter |
 Angelpoint 3/5/11 . chapter 5ooh, neal wake up soon or they're gonna plug you out ! |
 govgal 3/4/11 . chapter 5Yeah! He'sstill alive! Love Peter, Elle & Mozzie all so worried. I wouldn't want to make that decision either. |
 MaraudingSnitch1314 3/4/11 . chapter 5Great chapter. Loved "Reese could scare a dead person awake with that glare of his" and Neal's perspective/semi-imprisonment. Keep up the good work! |
 MaraudingSnitch1314 3/4/11 . chapter 4Good chapter - Neal lives! :) I enjoyed reading Peter and Mozzie's interaction. |
 georgiamomma123 3/4/11 . chapter 4Great update! I so love Moz! Keep it up! |