|Reviews for Forging On|
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 18
Very, very enjoyable .. loved the playful ending and the love shared between team members.
Hope you're working on something new!
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 17
This was a fun chapter ... loved all the looks she got wearing John's shirt. Eager to see what happens with the weapon she left him.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 16
Ahhhh nice to see them together again. Loved Teyla's comments to Larrin as she passed by. Nice Chapter.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 15
Beautiful ceremony - gotta love Katana for stating the obvious!
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 14
So sad ... hopefully they'll be able to repair the ships and their relationship - very good story.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 13
Nice battle ... a bit worried what the damage will do to their relationship ... pushing on to the next chapter.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 12
Nice ... love how the Wraith came out of nowhere - totally caught me off guard. Excellent.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 11
Great idea to turn his jumper into a ferris wheel ... fun to see their reactions.
I'm a bit worried to see how this long distance thing will work out.
| hifield 4/19/11 . chapter 10
Well, you're right, I don't think I've ever seen this subject matter covered before! lol
On to see what happens ...
| hifield 4/18/11 . chapter 9
Very well written. Sometimes we forget the hardships our military people have to endure but you captured it perfectly. Really enjoyed it.
| hifield 4/18/11 . chapter 8
I'd love to see this work out but there is definitely a distance problem ... they need to give it a shot though.
Really enjoying the story.
| hifield 4/18/11 . chapter 7
I enjoyed this chapter - I'm still smiling over John's revelation - "I'm so dead" - yes, indeed! Love that flyboy.
| hifield 4/16/11 . chapter 6
Great month of leave indeed! Very interesting chain of events - looking forward to more.
| hifield 4/13/11 . chapter 5
Loved how John got back at Larrin with the whole episode in the 302 bay. Good chapter!
| lanteanscribe 4/10/11 . chapter 18
How wonderful that they have finally made a committment to each other and I loved the note Larrin write to John explaining her custom and exchanging tokens! I loved this story and I do hope that you can find inspiration to write another! Thanx for sharing!