Very, very enjoyable .. loved the playful ending and the love shared between team members.

Hope you're working on something new!

This was a fun chapter ... loved all the looks she got wearing John's shirt. Eager to see what happens with the weapon she left him.

Ahhhh nice to see them together again. Loved Teyla's comments to Larrin as she passed by. Nice Chapter.

Beautiful ceremony - gotta love Katana for stating the obvious!

So sad ... hopefully they'll be able to repair the ships and their relationship - very good story.

Nice battle ... a bit worried what the damage will do to their relationship ... pushing on to the next chapter.

Nice ... love how the Wraith came out of nowhere - totally caught me off guard. Excellent.

Great idea to turn his jumper into a ferris wheel ... fun to see their reactions.

I'm a bit worried to see how this long distance thing will work out.

Well, you're right, I don't think I've ever seen this subject matter covered before! lol

On to see what happens ...

Very well written. Sometimes we forget the hardships our military people have to endure but you captured it perfectly. Really enjoyed it.

I'd love to see this work out but there is definitely a distance problem ... they need to give it a shot though.

Really enjoying the story.

I enjoyed this chapter - I'm still smiling over John's revelation - "I'm so dead" - yes, indeed! Love that flyboy.

Great month of leave indeed! Very interesting chain of events - looking forward to more.

Loved how John got back at Larrin with the whole episode in the 302 bay. Good chapter!

How wonderful that they have finally made a committment to each other and I loved the note Larrin write to John explaining her custom and exchanging tokens! I loved this story and I do hope that you can find inspiration to write another! Thanx for sharing!