 authority02 6/23/11 . chapter 1Vegita can hold back magnetism WITH HIS HAND! SO. AWESOME. |
 Gundum M 7/23/06 . chapter 1it surpises me but i liked it. Any chance of a sequal if you havent' already written one? |
 kory 3/13/06 . chapter 1 plz write a sequel if you don't i'll eat your children.
hahahahahahaha
but seriously i liked so i would apreciate it if you made a sequel from were you left ofl |
 kb 11/17/05 . chapter 1 WOW! That was really, really good. not only did it have a good story but it had really cool and vivid fight which is even harder to find on sequel? |
 Cylon One 6/3/05 . chapter 1I sure did enjoy it and I thought it was a great story. It was perfect except for a few mispelled words and I still think it is worth a sequel despite that. What I'm writing next are the few things I believe are wrong. 1.) "Vegita watched as it squirmed in agony in the flames before the energy became to bright as it reached its peak." The word "to" should be spelled with a double "o". 2.) The word "offence" should be spelled O-F-F-E-N-S-E. 3.) It seemed that each time I found the word "where", it should have instead been the word "were". Please let there be a sequel. |
 dogbertcarroll 1/11/04 . chapter 1Great fic, but I found the ending more
interesting then the story itself! |
 a fan 8/6/03 . chapter 1 you have to writ a sequal because this story is so alsome |
 Neo Kojiro 12/1/02 . chapter 1Nah, a sequel would be somewhat overdoing it...i just wish you didn't use that teaser of an ending.
Also, as i was reading through it, i though how odd it was for a fanfic by Carrotglace to not at least mention Ranma 1/2...i really should of guessed that you would mention it at least once... |
 Elvin Flame 11/3/02 . chapter 1Oooh! Great story and idea! Veggie beating up Maggie! LOL!
Sequel! |
 Super55 10/23/02 . chapter 1 This was great, The Superman in Nerima thing was great, would make a awsome sequel! Keep up the great work |
 Strider 7/17/02 . chapter 1 this story kicked ass! make a sequel! |
 I kicked your ass ho 5/11/02 . chapter 1 Very good story. But you should have put Superman against a stronger version of Goku because in reality Superman would kill Saiyan saga Goku in a couple of shots. |
 Kin-Chan 3/22/02 . chapter 1 This is cool! Coouyld you continue it, please, Carrot-sama? |
 Dragon Dagger 2/20/02 . chapter 1Sweet Kami that was Funny. We need to read more of this...Keep going...There are all sorts of wierd and wacky adventures...I mean what if the saiyans ended up on Earth and Superman on Goku's world... Ahhh the possibilities |
 anthony 2/17/02 . chapter 1 it was a very good story. make a sequel |