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OnTheTurningAway 3/11/11 . chapter 25
Finally playing catch up today... I really enjoyed your take on the Twi25 this round and don't think there could ever be enough Jasper. ;) Thanks for sharing!
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 25
:( I love Jasper. I hate him hurting.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 24
Curious where he took him. It sounds like a historical museum of some sort, but I am very often wrong. :)
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 23
If Jasper can project his emotions as much as he can take in the emotions of others, why not project calm and fearlessness to his victims?
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 22
Curious about the "She's mine!" Why claim that unless someone else has come into his area and he's responding?
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 21
These quiet, private moments are always so sweet.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 20
I'm kinda curious if Jasper is who she's been wanting or someone different. Maybe I'm just odd that if they're still in school they'd likely know each other's names, especially if they are having "fleeting touches". I also wouldn't think she'd be confused when she turned to see him.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 19
I'd love to know what part of the story this is from. Just before Bella has Renesmee? Just before Bella awakens as a vampire? A totally different part of the books?
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 18
Oh wow ... I've wondered about that before. They always show Alice fighting so easily in the "training" scenes because she can see her opponents' decisions but wouldn't having the wolves there have fucked that up?
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 17
Not exactly the same, but I have an aunt who doctors said would never live past the age of 5, then it was 16, then she'd never see 25 ... she'll be 62 this year. :)
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 16
Nice relay of the last of the fight scene. I love the description of the emotions surrounding Jake's injury. I can easily see the ripple affect he would feel due to their connected minds. That would have been intense.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 15
Gah. I think I know why he says "Soon, I will be." but it kills me if it is what I'm thinking.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 14
Edward always cracked me up with his ideals. It's a huge part of his appeal but being a female in this day and age I could also feel every bit of Bella's frustration.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 13
Hard question to ask, I'd imagine.
BLilTXgirl 3/4/11 . chapter 12
Awww ... Daddysper. :)
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