Oh, MAN. (that was gooooood). I wish this wasnt complete.

HA! They will SO be a couple after this mission :D Yay for that!

This one shot was awesome. Just the fact that you wrote about...not even the beginning of the relationship; just how it's going to get there. That really made it something special. Lol I don't know how you did it but I loved it :)

(BTW You're icon got me so damn emotional DX Why would you have that? Itachiiiiiiiii lol man I wanna cry now. Curse you! But yay for him coming back to life and being super cool :D)

Oh. This needs a sequel :)

Somehow, this touched me more than any disgustingly fluffy one-shots or fulfilling multi-chaptered story ever could. It's both beautiful and astounding the way you bring out the emotions, the atmosphere with such simple, radical terms.

There's hardly any action; just dialogue for the most part and you've got me reading and rereading and smiling like an absolute fool. I like the quaint atmosphere present in your stories. Scratch that, I love it. You truly have an innate talent for writing.

Don't ever stop writing because fans and readers alike could do with brilliant writing like yours to feed upon. I for one could reread this without ever losing that faint tug of thrill and intrigue caused by your words.

This is amazing. The feelings were so..real and it was in character. I'd die to see sasuke in frames.

Hope there's a sequel!

This is the second time I've read this. It's absolutely one of my favourite NaruSasu/SasuNaru fanfics. So in-character. So precious. I love it.

Sounds like its going to be a fun mission. That was great!

Oh my goodness, this story is sooo good. Please, please continue it! I can't wait for the next chapter

Oh my gosh! I love you dialogue and your jokes and your comments! Naruto and Sasuke are so life like, I've never read anything like this before, it makes me feel like this could actually happen and it isn't a Fic. I love it. The little romance between them is so delicate and yet so strong, I like how you leave us with the impression that it's been there all along and neither of them have realized. I felt my heart flutter at the extremely gentle, fluffy first kiss scene. They were both slow, and tender and... adorable. When they both just sparked and were kinda like, 'what the hell?' afterwards I was squealing in my chair! 'God I love when you laugh. I wish you did that more often,' is the cutest line in the story, it has a background and a history that help give us a peek into Naruto's romantic feelings. And then how it wasn't all, let’s have sex, or let cuddle or let’s eat each other up it was hesitant and cautious as they touched arms after the kiss. Beautiful, again, I love your plot and your style and your characters. Faving! Thx for posting this amazing Fic!

Very cute

I loved the kissing with glasses comment. Only issues I know of are if they both wear glasses and if one has facial piercings and they use hoop rings.

I enjoyed it very much

Kudos

Blade

Absolutely adorable. Brought many a smile to my face. Thanks for writing this!

Love it. Hope you continue the story

Ohhh sasuke in glasses, kinda sexy if you really think about it. This mission will make things very interesting. More please!

Your writing is nothing short of brilliance. I remember being a fan of your work on LJ, and I'm glad to see you have more recent work out. The emotions come out clear and the writing is very smooth and consistent! Oh, and your dialogue is so amusing!

"What were you expecting?" he asked.

"Not that," Naruto answered. He was still rubbing his fingers across his lips. "Shit."

Hah. You are good at taking things we know and love about the characters and incorporating it into your story.

Even though it was left where it did, in that awkward stage where they knew what the significance of how that kiss felt was, but didn't want to admit it, I felt strangely satisfied with where it left off. Weird, considering that I don't really 'love' most oneshots because they either leave you tasting something bitter or have a completely sappy ending, but no, this was a very natural and neutral in it's ending and I like it.

Please keep writing such amazing and beautiful NaruSasu... or SasuNaru. Both are emotionally appealing.

there needs to be more to this story! so awesome! :D

-Red