Very nice. Great suspense. Even better than the first story, I think. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Holy WOW! I just finished reading this "trilogy". I loved reading this! There were times when I was ready to jump though the screen and kill one or more of the characters. I was yelling at the computer and the characters. Good thing there's nobody around right now-I would have gotten some weird looks from my sisters. Great, awsome job on all 3 of these! One of the best DM stories that I've ever read!

You need to put a weeding of Jade and Steve. It would be great with all the drama of their perspective positions.

And think of all the people who be their to protect them if something happened.

Have fun.

Is this supposed to be a sequal to something? Because if it is, it's definitally not labled as so in the summery.

hi i realy injoyed the story i hope you right another like do thay move in together dose her parints come up the wedding day the firt kid do thay buy a house or stay at the beach house stuff like that well if u right another story please let me no thanks,
shelly

Great ending to a great story...I hope that in the near future you will continue with more Steve/Jade; Amanda/Shane; Jesse/Cami stories.

This was a good ending, I liked the three pronged attack, that was well done. I hope that there are still some Jade/Steve Amanda/Shane stories to come.

Tracy

This was another very good story. I hoop that you will continue the stories about Jade en Steve.

This is so good. I am really enjoying it. You have such a good series of stories going here. You said 'did you like this chapter?' Oh yes!

Tracy

Please write more soon...AWESOME chapter...can't wait to find out how they all get out of this.

this is great. continue on with the story.

you have left us hangging and i would like to know more.

like what the present is and how jade is going to get away.

please keep writing. very suspenseful.

This story has me sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to find out what Suzy and Riker will do next. I hope you write more soon.

I liked it very much don't let wait to long please for another chapter.

Ok...I hope you are working on the next chapter(s)

Keep up good writing! Great Chapter!

Great chapter...I'm looking forward to reading chapter 8...keep writing.