I'm from the Scottish Highlands myself. The story of William Wallace always gets the old Heilan' blood stirring!

This is very good. Nice to see the correct spelling of Seamus (I notice that in some fan fictions, the authors spell it as 'Shaymus' or some variation on that).

Ay should be spelled 'Aye' with an 'e' on the end, but that's not a biggie. You've done a nice job with this. :)

Wonderful story, You are a blessed writer Elijh