i like the story, it's to bad you don't write more in English. Cause i hate French so much. No offense. i don't even like Dutch and it's my own language xD. i like english the most. It's easier for me don't know why. I'm still not good at English but my Dutch is even worse xD.

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well i can't shut up like always xD

Wow, this was fantastic. It was a powerful piece, and you really packed in a lot of emotion. And your English is great. I didn't find any mistakes that stood out. Really good.

Oh my, that was just...amazing! I can't even describe how greatr it was, I mean you just...This is truly amazing, great job!