awe!

that is so sweet!

Beautiful! i loved all the old English in there. and i just loved to see Minako and Yaten together!

That was great, fairytales pull through after all!

more please

Col!I like it so much!

Oh my God! You have to continue this, PLEASEE! *insert wet puppy eyes here* I'm dying to see what happens! (let's just say this is the second time I re-read the fic in less than a monthxD)

The plot it's great! It remainds me of a faery tale somehow, it's so lovely... Oh what can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic girl that loves this couple with all her heart and that wants to see the end of your fic!_

I don't know what else to say, I love your style, and the old english (it's helping me try to figure out how it works as I have never read sometihing with old english beforexD)

Please continue and keep up the awesome fic_!

Ya umm I tried e-mailing you but the e-mail wouldn't go through I was wondering if you plan on updating your tekken fics Chance and I think Work together they wer kick ass, hope you do!

Please reply

i love ur fic! please continue it and update soon!

I LOVE this! But, you dont have to use old english constantly. it is kinda annoying! Love it and cant wait for a sequel!

hey nice story u should update more often I like it

what am I the only one who reiewed if I am well Don't get down on your self seriously I know its hard 2 write but ur story is cool seriously I'ts like the romeo and juliet thing with the old verbs and stuff and it's so cute but u seriously need to up date remember u also write 4ur self and not 4 othrs cuz ok if ur story is good then u should go on with it no matter what nobody else thinks I think is Great ya hear not only good but great ya got potencial seriously nobody in this damed site writes like that

hey again like i said last time i loved ur story I was wondering when r u updating

hey I like this It's like reading Romeo and Juliet UPDATE!

Update! This is so good, please updatte! hehe.

Can you update?