Now I KNOW that I'm going to love your work. It's Hinata based and it's not about her and romance and the second person taking the spotlight.

Now don't get me wrong I love a good Hinata romance story but you don't see very many with just her going on an adventure and if she did then she'd meet someone and it would be more romance then adventure.

So with that said I look foward to the next chapters.

But first a few words that is my motto.

I don't expect you to update right away. I know you have a life out side of your computer and you have an Actually Life that you most live. I'm not nor will I ever be one of those people that will ask you to update right away. Even if you don't finish this story I'll still read it over and over until you take it down.

So with that said have a happy and awesome life and I hope you live it to the fulliest! Ja Ne!

you have to continue this story! i just love it!

I love the chapter, can you please post the other one soon and can you make this couple happen I just love this two together. the couple are Roy x Hinata, so please post soon and make this couple happen if you want to I'm not makin you. Post soon. :D

This seems pretty interesting as of right now :) Please update soon!

-Jun Jin

when I read about this on pick-up lines, I had to read it.

FULL METAL ALCHEMIST IS MY MOST FAVORITE ANIME EVER! and putting naruto in it will just make this story even more epic. MUSTKNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

xXsilver swordXx

WOW! i love Hinata in FMA! PLZ UPDatE SOOON!

That's an awesome story! Keep it going!

It's interesting. I think you should continue. It would be fun to see Hinata in the other world and it's a crossover. :) Adventure is great

wow!