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RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername 3/13/12 . chapter 20
Let me start by saying that this is AMAZING! A lot of Gabriel/Sylar tics don't adress to problem of his Hunger, but I prefer it to be there, and I love your approach. Future more, I would love to read that sequel you hinted might be at the end there. Write On!
Secret-H 2/26/12 . chapter 20
What? Its done? Is there going to be a sequel or something?

Also, while it was a bit...I'm going to go with sappy, at times, I did enjoy the story.
Dumpster man 10/16/11 . chapter 12
Really good story update soon
Contridiction Queen 7/29/11 . chapter 12
Eep, Peter should avoid talking abou his abilites around someone with the Hunger. Keep at it Gabriel, he can try and fix yah!
G.I.R's-Nobody-Xirg 7/20/11 . chapter 8
Please tell me the rest of this isn't slash.
Inferable Hell 4/24/11 . chapter 7
Love it XD. Can't wait until March :)
Stupid Shiny Twilight Fan 4/22/11 . chapter 7
I can't wait for Peter and Sylar/Gabe to meet. It will be an interesting battle between Sylar and Gabe and Peter and Sylar.

Are Peter and Elle still friends? It seems like Peter doesn't trust her as much as he did before he knew about her lying to him.

I'm really loving this story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Selene Appia 4/17/11 . chapter 7
Okay chapter. I wish you had gone a bit more in detail, though: apart from Sylar, we don't really get to know what characters think. Good luck for your exams. :)
johncorn 4/15/11 . chapter 7
Ahh that is to long a wait
Selene Appia 4/8/11 . chapter 6
Nice chapter. Mmm... I wonder how Peter's partner is going to be. Well we'll see I suppose. PS: no marshmallow for me then, didn't notice a thing! xD
anon 4/7/11 . chapter 6
This is the best! I'm too lazy to log in tho, sorry :P
KafeiDetour 4/7/11 . chapter 6
Interesting story, I'm loving it so far.
Cat 4/4/11 . chapter 5
Hellos just found this story and I have to say I am liking it a lot! I hope you update soons!
Selene Appia 4/3/11 . chapter 5
Interesting start.
johncorn 3/31/11 . chapter 5
Can't wait for the next chapter
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