why you no finish?

This is a really well written story and I hope that you write more soon. THe characters are very much in character.

This is an awesome story! Its really amazing! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Oh, and will there be A/H?

Good, good! Please continue! You portray them so Out of Character, yet so In character at the same time, Bravo! Fear my Irregular capitalization! And overuse of Exclamation marks!

I love this story! I've been planning to write my own Atlantis Complex fic too : )

Last line sounded slightly unfinished, but all in all very touching. ;)

Very very very good. I can't find anything wrong with it :) I am going to add this to favorites. Please update very soon!

This is wonderful. It is refreshing to read a fanfic that portrays them as only a little more than best friends as opposed to weepy lovers. Thank you for this gift :)

Good job! You nailed the efficient Artemis when he was describing how he wanted to read up on everything to do with Atlantis.

I have my own theory of why Artemis can still feel Orion-I think his own feelings for Holly are starting to surface, and he just thinks it's Orion.

Update soon!

Wow, that's a lot to happen in one day. It's very interesting though. Good job.

very good. added to favorites and alerted

This is really great. you're awesome at writing sick Artemis 8)

Usually FanFiction is almost embarrassingly cheesy and badly written, but this was actually so good, I really enjoyed it! Fair play to you, and were I not from recession-stricken Ireland, I would definitely donate to your website. Good luck and I hope you continue writing 'cause you definitely have a gift!

:)

when he said "that horrible other me" did he mean another personality or just his paranoid side?

Hello,

im Mira and i live in Whangarei, just north of Auckland and i have to say, were all shocked here because of the quake. All our deep felt thoughts and prayers go out to you guys, and you especially. i am a big fan of the Artemis Fowl series and i must say, i check every week to see if new stories have come out on this website. I LOVED your story, it fitted perfectly and it made sense, not some other crap i have read where thers no story line etc. keep writing plzplzplz and remember, the whole of northland is thinking about you in Christchurch. Xoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox x 100000000, Mira