Hi!

Wow, your stories get me hooked right away! Please continue Akai Hakai and Infatuation please!

I'd really like to read how they turn out! _

Ganbatte!

Take care!

the random japanese gets extremely annoying. While I love using random phrases, at least stick to using entire phrases. Mixing, like you did here:

"Ryuichi-san, Nani is going on?"

looks awful and doesn't make much grammatical sense. *sigh* the formatting is also whacked, making it hard to read... I'm not sure if everybody knows what an "ahou" is... Tatsuha calls his brother "aniki," which is a good thing since "nii-chan" is mostly reserved for girls to call their brother.

YOU REMINDED ME OF THE RED STRING! GREAT! *sneaks off to school with a bunch of red string, tying everyone up with it* WAHAHAHA! NO ONE CAN MOVE NOW! And they're all connected so...*coveres the string with gunpowder and gas, oil and a few other explosive things* BURN! *drops a match on it and runs off*

Yukari: *shoves brother off of keyboard* Baka. The red string of fate connects lovers, not death.

Yu: *shoves sister off of keyboard* Well in a way it does!

Yukari: *shoves him over again* That was a great fic..._;

Yu: Well, to tell you the truth, I-

Yukari: *shoves a sock in his mouth*

YYEEAAHHHH,LOVVEEEEEE IT,LLOOVVEEEE IT

SOOOOOO MMMUUCHHHHHHH,*hugs and kisses*..

KKKKEEEPPPP UUUPPPPP THEEEEE GOODDDD

WWWOORRKKKK NEEEEE,till next time,

JJJAAAAA and GGAANNNBBAAATEEE-NEEEE...!_!