This is great! I really like how it's in the style of the book (does that make sense?). You're a great author, thanks for writing this!

Wow this was really good! Great writing, great finality at the end, I loved it! Best of all it stayed true to the characters. My fav line is defiantly:
I knew, I think, even before she did, that she loved him. The moment she screamed his name and he leapt through fire for her, I knew.

This is wonderfully done. Great job!

i like it. and i agree with it! greatjob!

That's... Emotional... Poor Simon. *sighs*

You did a good job, saying otherwise would be lying.

This seems really like Simon. Awesome job!

I really like this exploration of the two brothers, and the way you did it, from Simon's point of view-very risky, and very well done. Thank you! :)