Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more, please update

Cool story

Your story is interestind ;)

I hope the next chapter comes soon XD

Ooh. This looks interesting. So Yukimura is somewhat of an enemy here, huh? And then, Riiyu and Naoya are together. But, what about Yukimura then? Please update!

not to sound stupid or cheesy but I think you fried my brain with the awsomeness of this story.

Ooooooh! So Yukimura is actually Michael? I really, really love this! But you aren't going to make it a sad ending, are you? Please don't! I ask because I saw you put in in 'tragedy' so... I'm scared! Well, anyway, please, update soon! I think I'm going to go check out the first version of this now, if it's still online...

I love this already, and I'm very curious about what will happen next... Is this still YukiRyo? I hope so! Going to read chapter 2 now!

On my. This isnt going to end well. Anyways, I cant wait til you update again.

Great start! Although I liked it better when Ryo was an angel, but this version is also interesting

I'll be looking forward to the next update (:

- DPD

Its a good start, its all ready starting to become interesting, I cant wait for more to be up !

Hope you update soon

Evci

i was actually looking forward for a new chapter of Fallen Seraphim but this is a good start too. :)

even I have my own doubts about my religion and beliefs. you're not alone. hahah

please do update soon.

MysticBlood

A great starting, though I don't know why you had to rewrite Fallen Seraphim though, I found it interesting. :) Well, I hope that you'll update this soon!

Fadey

Nice start so far...I like it. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I like it, can't wait to see where you'll take this story.

I like this it is much better than the original.

i can' wait for the next chapter!