| Reviews for My Nemesis |
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E.B.R.forever 6/1/11 . chapter 5Haha. That's so funny Lois probably would shot Clark. This is really good to bad Smallville didn't actually follow your lead on Clois. I never get tired of hearing them go at each other. Who else does Clark have to keep him on his toes at all times. |
Sliverloc303 5/12/11 . chapter 16Go Johnathan and Martha! They so called Clark and Lois's true love back in season 4. Great stories, well done" |
Jeremy Shane 4/12/11 . chapter 16Good Chapter & More Please |
Hotchocolate329 4/12/11 . chapter 16hi, that was nice. thanks can't wait to see next. |
LoisNClark4Ever 4/12/11 . chapter 16Aww...that was just great! I loved Finale and how Clois - despite their denials - will be missing each other. Haha. I also enjoyed Lois's late night visit to Clark. Haha. I just couldn't get enough of your delicious description of his amazing chest! That Lois is SO lucky! :P And of course, who could forget their baseball game getaway! Their bantering during the long drive was pretty funny, but I gotta tell ya, I absolutely adored their...okay, more like Clark's tender moment when they got home and he saw Lois curled up asleep. I've always loved it when he'd carry her up to his bedroom because it's those moments that I know, he sees her in a different light. :) I guess the same can go for Lois during the events of chapter fifteen! The angry text messages she left Clark was soooo funny and your description of his anguish had me feeling for him. Haha! Thank you so much for the laughs, the banter, and of course, the tender moments. I can't wait to read your Easter drabbles. :) |
TaraLittle 4/12/11 . chapter 16Loved the update! So funny how Lois got all dressed up to say good bye to Clark. Could totally see her doing that, lol. I enjoyed these drabbles very much and looking foward to the Easter one. Good Luck on finals! |
cathy03 4/12/11 . chapter 16this serie was so sweet and funny. I had a blast readng it ;) Now i'1l wait for the Easter drabble... no, i'm not pushng LOL :D |
CaptainTightPants12 4/12/11 . chapter 16Where do I begin! Lois dressing up for Clark? Awesome! Or how about Lois getting him back for calling her (and that is debatable! haha) fat way back in Chapter 1 when he didn't jump her? Loved it! And I especially loved the call-back to the very beginning of the story! Their hugs and whispers? Perfect! I can definitely see them doing that! And of course, the cherry on top (as usual), the Kents telling him that this was not the last he would see of Lois Lane! haha. That was perfect! I can't believe it's over, but I guess all wonderfully awesome things must come to an end at some point in time. I can't wait to see what you write next! Hopefully soon! |
alexindigo 4/12/11 . chapter 16Hey! Welcome back. :) Ah, my bad. So it was Lionel. I like that. I do think Erica and John have great chemistry in the handful of scenes they've had. Plus he's a sexy beast. :) Thanks for clearing that up. This chapter was hilarious! Clark too engrossed in Lois that he forgot to feign pain? Lois trying to get back at him and failing. Their little goodbye hug and double entendré messages. Hehe. Loved it! Am looking forward to your Easter drabble. Please do a chapter (or new series) with them as a married couple or already together. I love the way you write their interactions with each other. :) Thank you for sharing! ) |
alexindigo 4/12/11 . chapter 16Hey! Welcome back. :) Ah, my bad. So it was Lionel. I like that. I do think Erica and John have great chemistry in the handful of scenes they've had. Plus he's a sexy beast. :) Thanks for clearing that up. This chapter was hilarious! Clark too engrossed in Lois that he forgot to feign pain? Lois trying to get back at him and failing. Their little goodbye hug and double entendré messages. Hehe. Loved it! Am looking forward to your Easter drabble. Please do a chapter (or new series) with them as a married couple or already together. I love the way you write their interactions with each other. :) Thank you for sharing! ) |
alexindigo 4/12/11 . chapter 16Hey! Welcome back. :) Ah, my bad. So it was Lionel. I like that. I do think Erica and John have great chemistry in the handful of scenes they've had. Plus he's a sexy beast. :) Thanks for clearing that up. This chapter was hilarious! Clark too engrossed in Lois that he forgot to feign pain? Lois trying to get back at him and failing. Their little goodbye hug and double entendré messages. Hehe. Loved it! Am looking forward to your Easter drabble. Please do a chapter (or new series) with them as a married couple or already together. I love the way you write their interactions with each other. :) Thank you for sharing! ) |
A.sky 4/12/11 . chapter 16Very cute!I can picture them both blushing and then trying to hide it haha! (well, I'm not sure Clark can really blush, but you know ..:))They were so funny when they were this ackward..loved it! And I'm really happy for some Easter drabbles! Best of luck w/ your finals! |
krystil lilow 4/6/11 . chapter 15 these are so awesomely funny! keep up the good work! |
Captain Zangano 4/4/11 . chapter 14Aww...cute. and funny. Especially the ending. |
CaptainTightPants12 4/3/11 . chapter 14That was too cute, haha. If only Lois knew how fast Clark acually can go! And oh, oh, oh! Was Clark jealous of Lois having a thing for Joe Mauer? haha. He got suckeed into that one! hahaha. And of course, Clark carrying Lois up to his room was the cherry on top! It was so sweet and peaceful until, of course, Lois whispered that she was going to kill him, hahahaha. I loved it! And oh, a bonus drabble? That was great! I loved how Lois plans on killing Clark, hahaha. She only gave him fifteen minutes to reply, hahahaha, that's so Lois! And of course, that line about her not knowing about kryptonite and yet Clark is resigning himself to his fat, hahaha. That was pure gold! I loved it! I'm sad that it's ending, but at least we'll have a finale! Can't wait! |