That was SOOOOOO good!

This is so sad but it was so good! Good job! :')

Oh my god...I read both books,and I never really thought about how Teddy felt. I was so sad when Teddy died,and this hit me in a different way. Thanks for this.

really good liked this very much

So sweet! Teddy is such a cute character. I cried when he died! :(
Great job!

I just finished reading the actual book, and I came right on here to read some fanfiction about what was next, but this was absolutely brilliant! Very well written, and very sad.

Awww. . . poor Teddy.:( This is a really good insight and it's writtem really well!

it is really good! make me cry, and believe me thats hard to do

Wow! Your story is really powerful- it made me cry! I cry when Teddy dies in If I Stay every time I read it. Unfortunatly, the first time I read it I was at school, during lunch time. The amout of people that came to ask if I was okay! They were all just like 'Are you alright?' and my friend who's read it too just said 'Teddy's dead, isn't he?' But CONGRATULATIONS- getting the reader to experience emotions is quite difficult and you did it really well.

so good

I think this is the strongest thing you've written yet. I can feel the pull back and forth as Teddy reviews his options, and the descriptions of the accident scene are very good.

Great job, babe!

So. Sad. It's a good story, but it almost made me cry. Considering we're talking about me here, that's like making me flood tears. Please make a sequel!

That was amazing!And all know I love tragedy stories,especially the ones that make me was superb writing.I am so happy that I am your are an amazing person.I am simply not worthy of your friendship. :)

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