I loved these two chapters. They were so well written and I got really engrossed in the story! I felt so bad for Matty to the point where I wanted to slap the rest of the FACE family. I mean how could they! grrr. Anyways just wanted to say that it was awesome and you are an amazing writer :)

Poor Canada. I don't think I could handle it like he could if I was always being mistaken for a sibling or forgotten and neglected. That's what makes Canada one of my favorites: He always stays strong and forgives. I probably would have attacked someone by then.

Anyways, I digress. Good story I loved it!

Gosh I don't even know what to say. that was just very well written and I enjoyed this very much :)

-OK so this is for the second chapter-

ohhh my goondeessssss. That was seriously good.

You are one of those rare people that can really write the relationships between these characters and not make me run away gagging. For serious. xD

I really really liked this chapter. One thing though, you kept switching back and forth between the country names and the human names. That was a little weird. I prefer to use the human names myself, because I just think it makes it seem more real.

So yeah. I liked how made Arthur mistaking Matt for Al actually seem plausible and all.

And the whole "he's been gone for years" that was really good. 8)

I like how you actually used some of the different dialect stuff and slang for the different countries, like the 'love, and hoser and stuff' and now I am going to shut up

Awwww, so cute!

Haha, just like Al to just dissapear like that as soon as something goes wrong and let Mattie get all the blame.

I really like how you had the French in there. It something that I somehow always had in mind to do with stories like this, where some of the characters speak other languages. But I was afraid if I did it mine it would come out cheesey. I don't trust Google translators, and I don't know any French or German or anything, so I always have to ask my friend that's in German in school to make sure I'm really saying what I think I'm saying xD

haha, wow another long review, sorry

wow! i abdolutely luv this! D

Beautiful story! Really angsty but this is pretty much my head canon for Canada. I see him as a really tragic character that I don't think will ever be truly happy.

Perhaps one day you will right another bonus chapter? :D

Love it! Amazing! Please write more!

Aww, this was cute but quite sad. Arthur shouldn't have slapped him. :( Good fic, though!

Wow!

That was so beautiful! 3

I love FACE family moments sigh

Will there be more precious moments?

This is really sweet - and I just love reading about Papa!Francis and Daddy!Arthur :)