interesting take on a relationship that was never really explored. cool story. :)

This is great and original

Beautiful, well written piece. Nicely done.

I like this. I agree that Zuko idolized Lu Ten. I like the examination of how Lu Ten's death had such a big impact of Zuko.

3 Beautiful.

I never looked at it that way. But this makes me think!

I love it!

Excellent in every way, no hyperbole.

It's great to see some well done Zuko-introspection on Lu Ten, and I think you've captured his feelings and thoughts perfectly accurately.