Great poem. I love how it ends, "Do you want me or do you want the dream of me?" I've never thought of it like that, but it does bring up a lot of questions and possibilities.

Hey not bad not bad at all. You know sometimes I like a good romance fic.

Nifty poem...neat choice of words, like hovering and innuendoes. I felt like Usagi was sort of drifting into her dreamland, splendid in that way _. Insulted would be insults, though, wouldn't it? _; Anyway, please read one of mine if you ever can! Sayonara! _ Keep writing just like this!