In a way, it is disturbing to read, but in another, the way you presented this seems to capture Azula well.

Fwoosh

Whoa.

Upon reading this, I expected another one of the watered-down writings that comes from so many hyped-up fans that think they have a masterpiece on their hands. However, unlike the poorly written works I have become so used to, I found this to be a rather well-written relief. The writing is fluid and there is a slight note of unexplained mystery that gives the reader the opportunity to think deeper that what is given. In my opinion, I have to say well done.