Cliché and crap

Wow! That's amazing for a first fic!

I never liked Ketchum. However, after reading about what he went through in your brilliant fanfic, I could not help but symphatize with him.

You write very well.

Contact me if you wish.

Great story. I was afraid he might try to commit suicide or something, but you ended it with a happy moral type thing. I like it!

Gah...How...sad...wah...*sniffle* Poor Ashy *;o.o;* Ummm...Wah...I...can't think of anything else...gosh, this is the first fic i've read in a while so i'm kinda out of it...so...Tat's all...*_*;

Hurries off to go find some Kleenex. "Poor Ash... first Misty, then Pikachu..." Sniffle. "Nice plot, and idea, too. A few typos, but hey, I'm not one to comment on that. Very nice... and very sad."