This is quite the fanfic, with a whole lot going on in it. I find the Lord Kass finding his soul subplot to be quite interesting. Sadly, this story is riddled with errors, some that could easily be fixed. Beyond the grammar, there is simply too much going on at once! It feels rushed, as the story flits from character to character to character. Overall, it is a decent try, but it definitely needs some editing before it will be the epic you are hoping for. :3

update

are Brynn & Hanso going to be in this story?