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Okay, I liked the story but somehow I feel that it was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too rushed. You should've done something about that. I'm surprised no one told you before.

Aww, great story!

I love this story! Some parts had me gasping, made me jump out of my chair and made me smile like an idiot! The ending was cute :3 One of my favorites!

okay, I put it google translate and I came up with some thing a little bit different:

Thalia shine. "It was a total bad to me. Back to her. I do not care if Percy girlfriend or not. "Annabeth looked at the Thalia levelly. "It will work better if you do it during the lunchtime campfire afterwards. If you do it at lunch will be caught to end quickly. Plus you will be hungry. Fire can cover for you. "" I knew I had to leave! »Thalia cried, raising his fist to. Just then they heard a pair in the woods. Saw Gloria, her friend Percy, perfect person, but could not make out his face black woolly boy next to her.

I actually laughed the last part, google translate really sucks!

Nice story but I think you should write more to it

i have a friend named aaorn burrnet we are both 14 he was born april 28

Cheesy...but tots cute! :) Gonna faint. X)

That cherry thing was way too random. A bad random that is

Percy shouldn't be calling annabeth 'sweetie' that soooooooooo un-Percy-ish. The ending was abrupt and sucky. Happened to suddenly

that was SO good. I loved it!

Thalia is older than Annabeth but she looks younger because Zeus turned her into a pine tree and her age slowed down then she joined the hunters so she would look young forever! Nice story anyway.

Yes! LONG LIVE PERCABETH! If I haven't said it enough by now I will repeat myself...You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Please write some more PJO's, I really like reading your stories!

Awesome :)

Love it! Keep up the great work!