| Reviews for Tekkaman Blade III: Nightmare |
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Anya 4/8/12 . chapter 78 If one chapter wasnt enough, your followers got two... more than this is too much to ask for. I feel that you had plan 78 as part of 77 but you preffer to give it its own space, nice idea! Like Natasha said at the end of 78, the epic battle between wraith and blade its about to begin and this is a battle that had being on hold for to long. As am imaging being blade the protagonist of these story it means that wraith wont be having a good ending, sad! I like the cliffhanger of Aki telling Sayaki, lets go. Its so open to our interpretation, is Aki good or Aki bad... intresting... Am bitting my nails until you give us another amazing chapter like the ones you had being delivering. |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 78Have just read this chapter and I'm still digesting it. Delicious dish, cook, gimmie more! So this review will still have the incoherent echos of a still squealing fangirl. Say it ain't so! Freeman! Nice touch for D-boy's Blastor. PLEASE tell me that Sayaki's confidence is about to get a lance sliced through it :D |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 77"D-boy needs to strap a watch to his knuckles and knock Noal around for a bit", was my first impression on the opening. I would've loved to see the General dragged through the mud at trial though part of me suspects he'd still weasel his way out of it. So Dead kills him? Noal shouldn't be too upset, he obliterated the remains... I can't help but wonder if the soldiers are going to declare all out war against the Space Knights and dismiss the recording as a creative lie? Akito's response is interesting and I'm curious to see what he's going to do next. Berserker rage! Wraith's going Wolverine on us! Uh oh. This won't end well... |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 76Yet another morsel of homage goodness! Sayaki borrowed Shinya's idea of infiltrating the Space Knight base. Delta showing a rare moment of humanity. Homage to the convoy from Io? Interesting, is there a part of her that could be saved? Hmm. I'm still unconvinced and cheering for Team B!tch-slap. Loving the flashbacks and yet another thrilling conclusion! |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 75Someone revive me, I’ve fainted from fanfiction goodness! FLASHBACKS! Nice touch and such a good way to write the story! I should be able to articulate my thoughts on this chapter far more coherently but I’m too busy squealing like a dazed fangirl. So much revealed, finally! So much D-boy/Aki goodness! The tragedy of a team who became family, falling victim to circumstances and sinister motives beyond their control. The interseries goodness continues. Somebody, hand me a cigar! You’ve written some fantastic chapters, but this one really shows off your talent at twisting an existing storyline to suit your purposes. All characters are well developed and putty in your hands. It’s really clever writing and I bow to your greatness. P.S. Aki's vegetarian? Very nice :D |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 74Ah, D-boy. Still as eloquent as ever. Love it! Oh dear, Okita's in trouble. Poor Akito, I don't see a good outcome for his lifetime of lies...if the truth is ever revealed to him...and if he ever believes it. Go Wraith! Ah, but wouldn't the Noal of the first series be appalled to see himself now? I must confess that I felt thoroughly swept along by your story. What a wild ride, right up to its thrilling cliff-hanger! |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 73This has to be said. It’s a minor point but in case your readers are reading the reviews, note the use of proper spelling and grammar. For example, the General realised ‘he could have sent the boy’, not ‘could of sent the boy’. I can’t express (without extensive profanities) how frustrating it is to see crimes against language so often. Oooh, intrigue! Levin left the Space Knights for ‘personal reasons’. He’s not ready to face Aki and D-boy. Talk about awkward custody agreements, D-boy and Sayaki trump ‘em all! I so wish to see Daddy swoop in and rescue his boys, file a restraining order against Sayaki and have her parenting rights revoked, and live happily ever after with Aki and Shinya. Nice to see Dead up and about. Is he still looking for scapegoats or getting to the bottom of Black September…finally? Nice take on the Space Knight’s involvement with the incident, I’ve been waiting for the juicy details that lead to so much friction between comrades. Oh, Sayaki…somebody needs to smack you. |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 72Isn't fanfiction awesome? It gives an author the opportunity to twist possibilities and infuse ethical questions into its heart. That said, I've been waiting impatiently for this day when Shinya's latent powers are again unleashed. You didn't disappoint. So well written! Though Milly and D-boy seem to have an understanding, I still wonder how swift the undercurrent of each other's resentment flows. Aiba twins 2.0 is developing nicely - will Okita persuade Akito to think beyond his programming, is it even possible? Or will Akito play on Okita's insecurities? Clever naming, too, though writing Akito and Okita in quick succession requires a bit of effort ;) Lovely scene between D-boy and Aki and the eyecatch was very curious. Curious, indeed. I'm grinning with anticipation! Oh, Noal, you need a cuddle! It's an interesting dynamic you've got going here but I can't see it ending well... Sayaki. How I wish to see you burn. Ok sure, you were continually bested by Aki in your pursuits. Your love was spurned. Some sick, twisted, high-on-power authority figure abused his privilege and perverted the truth. Stole a child from you. Ok, fine, there's a bit of sympathy there for you (well done, author, only suburb writing could achieve that!). I still I want to see you cop a butt-kicking. Preferably by Aki. No quarter asked/given kinda fight. I'm dreaming though, aren't I? But dreams really do come true. One more of dream has come to a reality...you've returned our favourite red-haired genuis! How I've missed that fella! |
IronicSymphony 4/8/12 . chapter 71I love that you've utilised the Burning Clock story arc, and other interseries arcs. The dream imagery is spectacular and cleverly interwoven. The Okita/Akito twist is so tantalisingly full of opportunity and a nice nod to the original Aiba twins. It was so out of the blue and I admit, I squealed. I'm can't wait to see this storyline unfold. I love how twisted by power your Pavlocheva is (nice intro of 'Mr' Colbert, ha, snap!). Natasha getting to work at righting the wrongs committed by her father is also a nice touch and gives her character dimension that TB2 just didn't allow time for. |
anya 3/31/12 . chapter 76 Nice chapter, i love the dragonball reference jajajajajaja very funny... I had to admit that am amaze on how you put everything together and even add things blade and aki wedding and other details... Now am curious what is going to happend to the old general since now everybody knows a good percentage of the truth... Update soon! |
Anya 3/25/12 . chapter 75 Thanks a lot for the update, it was a nice touch to made it on the anniversary. Even do its a chapter to fill blanks it was a good one to obtain answers. Love the romance scenes between Blade and Aki and felt sorry for Delta and her children. The ending clifhanger with Sayaki doing something that Blade twin did in an epsidoe in the past. Good work and i will praying for the next update be this week again. :) |
Guest 3/20/12 . chapter 74 Wow long wait but it pay for it. thanks for such amazing chapter please update the next one soon. i love that natasha have some feelings since in the cartoon she seems so cold. but i have a feeling it wont end to well for noal, sad :( |
anya0636 3/2/12 . chapter 72 Nice work even with the comercial break jajaja. i like how things from the past and future are comming together. the ending introducing Levin was sweet. update soon! |
Anya0636 2/27/12 . chapter 71 hello, even do i felt this was a filler episode i really like it with the introduction of Akito. I feel that Natasha have other plans underneath the onces she is executing right now, could it be that she is trying to find Noal? Please update soon the story is getting intresting. |
anya 2/14/12 . chapter 70 Thanks for taking in consideration my words. i love this new chapter and the cliffhanger was the best. i like the analyse that dboy did in many scene of the story cause that makes him be more human. also showing the other partwicular life that a SK like Hayato and Goliatte can have give us a tension breaker... hoping to read next chapter soon |