 Cassandra Elise 3/24/03 . chapter 1Wow! I read this story several months ago and was too lazy too review. This is well-written, funny, and true to the Get Smary characters. My only complaint is the fact that the Knife made Max bleed. In the sixties, the violence was campy for the most part and blood was not present. I don't think blood was ever in any Get Smart Episodes.
Also, You wrote that Maz decided 99 was a woman on their wedding night. Well, I don't think he was thinking too much about anatomy, because he spent the night hung up on the door. (Remember the map appeared on his chest and he couldn't sit or lie down because he would ruin it?)
Anyway, the story is still very good and you have great talent. |