|Reviews for Rough Edges|
| coolsville times 12/13/12 . chapter 1
This was a very nicely written fic. :)
| iryna 9/3/12 . chapter 1
I love this! :D I think you wrote Kenpachi with just the right amount of simultaneous sweetness and roughness. Well done!
| naru894 2/28/12 . chapter 1
this is in his own way really cute XD
| sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 1
I think Kenpachi is hot.
Thanks for writingbthem!
| TheGreenElephant911 10/2/11 . chapter 1
"Poor Isane. I suppose that she will have nightmares for the next month" LOL! Too true! Maybe more than a month! I swear, that was the funniest part. Oh how I love this. Well written and funny near the end. I'm still smiling as I write this
| Octavia Brown 9/18/11 . chapter 1
*sigh* I like this a lot. UnohanaXZaraki is a pairing that has inspired me to start writing fan fiction. So I like looking around at other people's stories for it and this one is really good. It's a sweet moment.
| Esmeia 8/8/11 . chapter 1
I... I think you just got me to love Zaraki x Unohana!
I have never even considered this pairing before, but you made me really think about it! And this pairing works out great in my mind now!
I love your writing style. It's sexy, but has a real sweetness to it. Also, they were both kept in character!
Great job! I'm going to check out your other works as well!
| giulia 5/10/11 . chapter 1
really nice this fan fic!*.*
i love Kenpachi too and this hypothetical relationship is really intriguing!
there's only one thing I would like to see if you were going on with the story, the reactions of members of 11 Division and all the others, in coming to know of these secret meetings between the two captains... )
Anyway nice work I especially like certain scenes, as when he brushes his hair, or when she touches his scar!
Would be too great if Tite Kubo decides to give us some little time with the two together ...
Instead I made some drawings of Kenpachi and even a scene between the two captains _
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| Sepsis 4/29/11 . chapter 1
| BurntFrostBite 4/23/11 . chapter 1
i don't understand why there's only five reviews? this was amazing!
| thablueGRRL 4/4/11 . chapter 1
you didn't make him soft at all, you kept his personality but managed to include how he would realistically act in a relationship.
| lovering 3/31/11 . chapter 1
Now that's an interesting pairing...I really liked this story; it was well done.
| mom calling 3/6/11 . chapter 1
We always love the bad boys, unless they are evil bad boys. I had trouble with this vignette, but it's not your fault. It's that I don't know the Bleach story, except from a few fanfics which usually focus on ?Uchiro?-did I get that right? And I am dense as a stump with Japanese names. I have trouble keeping a name to a personality 'cause they all sound so similar. When I was going thru a Russian novel phase, long ago, it was the same. Still, a virile man slipping into a lady's room with lovin' on both their minds-don't need to remember names so much... thx, VNinja. mc
| Oni Kenpachi 3/5/11 . chapter 1
that sounds like kenpachi nice job