So far so good. I can't wait for the rest of the story.

This is so far very very good! I've thought about writing a story like this, so seeing a story about the Egyptian Gods is very heartening! You should keep writing this story, it's the best I've seen in this genre. I have only one suggestion, and I'm sure it's just a preference. Don't leave a space between the first quotation mark and the quotation. It makes it a little hard to understand at times. But it's still very good!

Arciadrian

great story, id love to read more!

alex x