A wonderful story; poignant, emotionally honest, and believable.

My favorite section:

‘But now, he felt like he had stalled so much, that he's become stuck – following Gibbs' commands, teasing Probie (the kid's grown up and ready to go too now), Ziva – has just become too difficult, but any move to change it would carry the bitter sting of betrayal. He doesn't think he'd be able to swallow it.’

One thing I don't agree with is the rolling -your- r's thing. I CAN'T. Period. People have tried to teach me to roll my r's. I usually end up making funny noises and spitting. It is ridicul

Idk why, but I felt incredibly sad reading this, maybe it's cause you're such a great writer )

Very, very nice job. Definitely fitting for the stalemate they've found themselves in. And the timing never does seem right, does it?

Good fic. You nailed TIVA for OLS. This was bittersweet and good.

I sorry Writing is good! I just find it difficult for me to read for some reason! Especially reading Coto De Pablo will not be returning next season that she was going to work on her singing career. I really hate the EJ barrett losing interest in fan fiction. Ncis all not going to be the same bullpen group.

Oh that's so sad :( somehow, I feel like this is something that will very likely happen...sigh, I wish they would care less about timing. But this is a very beautifully written piece of work, and I really love it.

-Soph

beautiful,congratulationes I like very much!,excused my inglesh

You captured the frustrating vagueness that is their relationship currently on the show. I look forward to reading more from you.

great insight!